Have a look at this picture. What story can you tell? Who are the characters going to be?
As usual, you have just 100 words, so make sure you really think about the words you chose. Read your story through and edit your work.
You might have lots of ideas and want to write more than one!
Miss Foster you should do a book review page where we say the books we like!
What a brilliant idea Sam! Watch this space…
This story is about a boy who went fishing with his dad. It was his first ever fishing lesson and wasn’t very good. He had finally found a fish, it just jumped at him and he fell in, then 10 to 20 fish came at him! Luckily, he was a very fast swimmer and got out of the lake but one fish jumped at him! His dad was very good and got the fish and they went home.
The end
I was fishing today. I was nearly asleep when my dad shouted “I’ve got a big one, I’ve got a big one” The whole family rushed over to help him. “And push and push and…” Splash! A massive fish came flying out of the water flicking its tail frantically. The worst bit was that it was comming straight at me! Its ugly face came straight into mine, it wiggled and squigled on my face. My little brother started laughing (like it was funny). I pulled it away from me and with utter disgust I threw it back in the water.
One day I was fishing with my dad in our little boat on the lake. We hadn’t had one bite for about two hours. Finally I felt a small tug on my line. My dad shouted, “quickly pull it up before it gets away!” I pulled the line until my arms were aching and still held on.
Half an hour later it was right at the surface where we could see it. My dad came to help pull it up onto the boat, but right before it cleared the water, it made a leap for my face! As it sailed through the air I saw it’s mouth open and a row of razor sharp teeth were revealed. Before it hit me my dad made a lunge at it with his swiss army knife and caught it on the tail. On the deck of the boat the monster of a fish was writhing in pain. It made a bid for freedom my dad raised his hand and it took off his little finger.
The End
My mum is so mad at me. As people know I’m a scientist (well wanting to be one!) and I created a potion which was meant to turn my fish micro size. But I added too many frogs and baking soda so, it……well went awfully wrong as you can see. Its big eyes bulging out of its sockets, its obeseity is clearly wrong so I guess I’ll have to practise a bit more on that one!
It was yet another sunny day on the calm lake that ran through our peaceful little town. I smiled at the sweet sun and dipped my feet over the edge of our little fishing boat. Dad, Mum and my little sister Jodie were all cooped up in the little cabin at the stern of the boat while I roamed free on top. My fishing rod was dangling over the side while I waited for a fish to swim by. All of a sudden something tugged on the rod. I tugged back. Big mistake! SPLASH! Green murky water floating beside me I was flailing continuosly like a squirming rat. AHHHH! I screamed. To luminous bulging eyes were glaring right at me. I felt claw like hands wrap around my legs and pull me deeper and deeper. I was never to be seen again!
Sorry it was a bit more than 100 words!
“Look dad look!” shouted the ginger-haired boy, “I’ve got a big one!”
The man peered over the edge of the tiny fishing boat and saw it. Something as big as his son’s head and as orange as his hair, was thrashing violently beneath the shimmering water. Then suddenly, the fishing rod string disintegrated beneath thick layers of oozing green plasma and the creature swam away leaving a trail of black blood. The man gaped, sat back down and was about to pass a comment to his son when he realised the boy wasn’t there…
The serpentine reaper had taken another.
Today I heard that too much waste was being dumped into our lakes. And that if we continue the end won’t be pretty. My dad promised that we’d go fishing with his new fishing hat on, and that’s what we did. When we arrived, we waited for an unlucky fish to bite. I heard barking and rustling coming from behind dad and a vast dog pushed dad into the water! I couldn’t see dad anywhere. Then something tugged at my fishing rod. A huge, pink, ugly, bulging eyed fish with a brand new fishing hat jumped out of the water.
Fishing
It was a hot summer morning and I was fishing by a lake when it happened. I caught a fish! How surprising. But it wasn’t just any old fish, it was a jellyfish which, in case you don’t know, looks nothing like jelly. I could’ve and should’ve let go of the fishing rod, but I’m apparently not that intelligent. I think I got electrocuted by the fishing rod after that. Remind me to sue the company that provided me with that rod. Last time I go fishing in a piranha infested river, I almost got eaten by one!!! Appalling!
It was the weekend and Dad wanted to go fishing. “Nooo, it’s soooo boring! Plus I always get wet at the end of the day since Dad tips the boat over!” I moaned to mum.
“You have to!” and with that mum pushed me into the car.
At the lake I was really bored and not a single fish came. All of a sudden, there was a tug at my fishing rod. Mum and Dad started to pull my rod and there it was. A fat pink fish. I screamed and that scared Mum so we got tipped over by the boat.
One day I was out fishing with my dad. And we came back with the weirdest looking thing I’ve ever seen in my life. It was purple and had a Mohican down the middle of its back. Its teeth were slimy and it dribbled down its chin. Its eyes were popping out of their sockets, and its tail thingy was a bit like a snake. Its head was ten times the size of its hind. But I kind of like it; and now it is my pet. Don’t worry I know it’s weird, (by the way his name is Fishface).
Ben 🙂
Fishing with Dad.
Today dad promised we would go fishing, and so we did. I got onto our brand new fishing boat and we went right into the middle of the lake. My dad told me about a big worm fish with vast eyes and sharp teeth, but as I was thinking of this extraordinary creature there was a pull at my rod.
“A FISH!” I yelled, “A FISH!” It suddenly jumped up at me and I fell back into the water. When my dad pulled me out I was soaking.
“No more fishing for you,” he said, and we both burst out laughing. We got off the boat and went home.
The End! 🙂
The Old Stinger Fish in The Greewood Pond
Is impossible to catch
Unless you snatch.
This big meaty fish
Would make quite a dish.
It’s cheeky and strong
And has a little pong
But in your mouth
It’s an atomic bomb.
And that is it for the Old Stinger Fish.
But you know he’s there
He will always be there.
So be careful if you go to the Greenwood Pond.
“Mum” I murmured
“Yes Peter” Mum said
“ I’ve got a massive fish, can you help me?”
Mum quickly ran over to me and started winding the reel. Suddenly a massive striped, purple and pink fish jumped out of the water. Mum caught it, but it was slippery and slimy so she dropped it. It stayed on the floor. “Ahh” said the crowd. “Three seconds later legs grew out of it’s chubby body… We all stood still looking at the fish whilst it ate all of our bait. Then out of nowhere the vet came and put it in a cage.
I was bored. I was sitting on a boat in the middle of nowhere, fishing, who wouldn’t be? I was just about to turn back, but then I saw a tug on my rod, It was unbelievable; I had a bite. I ran over to the rod. I grabbed the rod, as I did so I was almost pulled over board! This was a big one I thought. I managed to get the fish into the boat, I went over to put in the bucket, as soon as I picked him up he started flapping again. I let go of him and he jumped back in to the water. I said “That’s the last time I’m going fishing!”
That Saturday, like every other Saturday, we packed up a delicious picnic and set off on our usual fishing trip. We jumped into the car and screeched off a speed as dad felt we were late. After having a long, tiring and bumpy journey, we made our way to the shimmering lake that lay between boulders with blankets of glistening moss. As we spread the picnic cloth on the green spongy grass, dad got out the fishing rods. “ Eww dad, what’s that!?” I panicked as I spotted the splashing, traumatising fish worm leap out upwards and rear towards my throat.
Nina:)
A girl was enjoying riding a cruise ship, taking photos of the sea and the fishing boats. She took a deep breath of the fresh but salty sea air, as she watched the skilled fisherman catching fish.
Suddenly she was startled by a loud scream. She almost dropped her camera. Everybody turned round to see what had happened. A young fisherman was yelling with surprise and disgust. At the end of his fishing rod was the biggest and the ugliest fish the girl had ever seen. It was a blobfish with a huge slimy pink body and a mangled nose.
When are we going to do more 100wc for homework?
Soon Heven, I promise! I love your enthusiasm!