THE GREAT SNAKE
Jake was nearing the end of his ‘Amazing Amazon adventure!’ He was excited. As he walked, he heard a hiss. “What was that?” Jake carried on walking, suspiciously. Then he saw it. A cobra. It was great. It had golden scales and a long body. Jake bolted. He heard another hiss. This was another cobra. Jake thought he was doomed when suddenly the snake attacked the one chasing Jake. The nice snake won. He winked at Jake and left. “So it is true!” Jake said to himself. “The story of ‘the great snake’ is not fake. Amazing!”
Once there was a snake who attacked a village every night. The villagers didn’t like it. The snake went out to eat the children. After two weeks time the villagers decided they had had enough of this, so they went to the Council Hall to discuss how to get rid of the snake. That night the snake came into the village as usual. It snuck a child and was gone. The next morning the villagers heard a whine and a scream and the snake came crashing to the floor. The village celebrated: the poisoned child had worked!
Once upon a time in the far away land, there slithered the world’s
deadliest snake, the black anaconda. It lurked in the shadow of
the jungle trees. One clear day, the anaconda was carelessly relaxing in the open where there was no trees. Suddenly, out of
nowhere came a huge hunter helicopter which had a handful of
rifle men hanging on to it, as it flew in dangerous motions. After a
few seconds one of the rifle men lined up his aim with the great
beast and took the shot. Luckily, the snake had got shot but did it die?
There’s a snake on the loose
And we don’t know what to do
It’s eaten a goose
It’s escaped from the zoo
It slithered up The Shard
And ate a lazy llama
And now it’s heading straight
To Eleanor Palmer.
Miss Frood said “Catch it!
Dead or alive”
But it’s too big to catch
And it’s heading to Year 5.
We called the police
And they said “we smell a rat”
This snake wants to go back to its
Natural habitat.
So they took it back to
The Amazon
Where the snake had fun
Relaxing in the sun.
The snake was rather big
It’s friend was a pig
The snake was very tall
As tall as a wall
The snake was rather wide
And it had a lot of pride
The snake lived in a lake
That was a big mistake
His wife had a big big hide
The wife was rather wide
The people gozzled and gawped
at the wife’s big big butt
There was nothing she could do
So she did a poo
And put on her shoes
And left the town BEHIND
(Get it ? “Behind.”no? Ok then spoil sport.)
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I woke up.
I waited 10 minutes for the wave of consciousness to appear.
Except it took longer than usual. That was strange. I dismissed the thought, but it immediately came back when I realized I had no arms or legs. Just one solid limb. I gazed blankly at the corner of the room…Then I saw the black spider.
Usually I’m scared of the eight legged creature, but I had a strange ambition to eat it… But that was ridiculous!…
Unbelievable in fact.
I found myself walking, sorry, SLITHERING towards it. before I knew it, my tongue leapt disobediently out of my mouth. Yum. What? no that couldn’t possibly be “yum”… unless… No. It was impossible… But it was true… I was a snake!
1. The anaconda is the world’s largest snake and they can grow up to 30 feet long!
2. They live in tropical rain forests, lakes and swamps they are especially numerous in the Amazon and Orinoco rivers.
3. They are usually dark green in color, have 2 rows of black spots on their back and white marks on their sides.
4. They can stay under water for 10 minuets.
5. They like to eat fish, turtles, caimans, capybaras, pigs, jaguars, deer…
6. They mate in April and May Six months later, female anaconda gives birth to 20-40 young anacondas.
Have you ever heard the hiss of the waters? If you have read this, if not, I advise you not to. It all starts in a little village along the river Nile, where a woman bathed in a lake; suddenly she felt a brush on her leg. One month passed and she thought not of it, until she gave birth to two snakes and chucked them in the river. If you are reading this, and have felt a brush on your leg, you know what’s about to happen.
My review on the great snake will not just show the good things but the bad things as well. Read on to see what rating this book gets.
In my opinion the Great Snake is good because it has a very good storyline and it is very imaginative, but I think they could have made it not so easy for Norato to find the “right person” to kill the snake skin.
Now for my suggestions to make the story even better. I think they could describe the starting snake more. And they could say more about Maria-Canana.
The king cobra is the world’s longest venomous snake it kills other snakes and averages three to four meters.
The Scrub Python is the largest non-venomous snake in all of Australia its maximum length is eight to five meters (28 feet).
The African rock Python has an average adult length of eighteen feet, and maximum 25 feet long. It eats any thing that it can fit in its mouth!!!
The carpet Python reaches between two to four meters. Males are smaller than females and females are four times heavier.
Be careful of these big horrible snakes!!!
Once upon a time in the Amazon rainforest there was a great snake. He was mean and cruel and over-confident. One day there was a tiny gerbil who was very small but very wise and he wanted payback on the great snake for destroying his home. Once the great snake had to stay with his friends the serpents, then the little gerbil got to work. They put leaves over lava and moved his home in front of it. When the great snake got home, he fell into lava and died.
THE END
There was once a great great snake
It lived in a big big lake
As it twisted and turned
It grimaced and cursed
For it was the a snake so great.
It loved to eat small fish
In fact it was her favourite dish
In her snapping jaws
Went the fish so small
And after all she was indeed very tall
For she was the snake so great.
There was once a great great snake
It lived in a big big lake
As it twisted and turned
It grimaced and cursed
For it was the snake so great.
My dad has never worn sandals since three years ago when we went to France and this is why. He woke up in a good mood but needing a stretch. It was early so he tiptoed downstairs. He noticed a forest and went into it. There was a path leading through the trees. Soon he got to ground which was covered in loose stones and just then a snake started moving towards him he turned and saw another! Jumping and swearing he ran!
THE GREAT SNAKE
Jake was nearing the end of his ‘Amazing Amazon adventure!’ He was excited. As he walked, he heard a hiss. “What was that?” Jake carried on walking, suspiciously. Then he saw it. A cobra. It was great. It had golden scales and a long body. Jake bolted. He heard another hiss. This was another cobra. Jake thought he was doomed when suddenly the snake attacked the one chasing Jake. The nice snake won. He winked at Jake and left. “So it is true!” Jake said to himself. “The story of ‘the great snake’ is not fake. Amazing!”
I love your story Danny!!!!
The Great Snake
Once there was a snake who attacked a village every night. The villagers didn’t like it. The snake went out to eat the children. After two weeks time the villagers decided they had had enough of this, so they went to the Council Hall to discuss how to get rid of the snake. That night the snake came into the village as usual. It snuck a child and was gone. The next morning the villagers heard a whine and a scream and the snake came crashing to the floor. The village celebrated: the poisoned child had worked!
SAME HERE JOEY !!!!!!!!!!!
Once upon a time in the far away land, there slithered the world’s
deadliest snake, the black anaconda. It lurked in the shadow of
the jungle trees. One clear day, the anaconda was carelessly relaxing in the open where there was no trees. Suddenly, out of
nowhere came a huge hunter helicopter which had a handful of
rifle men hanging on to it, as it flew in dangerous motions. After a
few seconds one of the rifle men lined up his aim with the great
beast and took the shot. Luckily, the snake had got shot but did it die?
Beware of the Great Snake my son,
Whose tail drowns those who swim out to far,
And upturns fishermen boats with a great RAR!
Beware of the Great Snake my son,
Whose teeth are as big as buildings,
And ruins all the fun.
Beware of the Great Snake my son,
Who is as long as double decker bus,
And whatever he eats he makes no fuss.
Beware of the Great Snake my son,
Who killed the Jaberwokey,
And ate an entire team who played hockey.
Beware Beware Beware Beware the Great Snake my son,
For he has never been defeated.
Lucky snake
There’s a snake on the loose
And we don’t know what to do
It’s eaten a goose
It’s escaped from the zoo
It slithered up The Shard
And ate a lazy llama
And now it’s heading straight
To Eleanor Palmer.
Miss Frood said “Catch it!
Dead or alive”
But it’s too big to catch
And it’s heading to Year 5.
We called the police
And they said “we smell a rat”
This snake wants to go back to its
Natural habitat.
So they took it back to
The Amazon
Where the snake had fun
Relaxing in the sun.
The snake was rather big
It’s friend was a pig
The snake was very tall
As tall as a wall
The snake was rather wide
And it had a lot of pride
The snake lived in a lake
That was a big mistake
His wife had a big big hide
The wife was rather wide
The people gozzled and gawped
at the wife’s big big butt
There was nothing she could do
So she did a poo
And put on her shoes
And left the town BEHIND
(Get it ? “Behind.”no? Ok then spoil sport.)
Sent from my iP
Slithering Suspense
By Louis Sayers
I woke up.
I waited 10 minutes for the wave of consciousness to appear.
Except it took longer than usual. That was strange. I dismissed the thought, but it immediately came back when I realized I had no arms or legs. Just one solid limb. I gazed blankly at the corner of the room…Then I saw the black spider.
Usually I’m scared of the eight legged creature, but I had a strange ambition to eat it… But that was ridiculous!…
Unbelievable in fact.
I found myself walking, sorry, SLITHERING towards it. before I knew it, my tongue leapt disobediently out of my mouth. Yum. What? no that couldn’t possibly be “yum”… unless… No. It was impossible… But it was true… I was a snake!
The Anaconda
1. The anaconda is the world’s largest snake and they can grow up to 30 feet long!
2. They live in tropical rain forests, lakes and swamps they are especially numerous in the Amazon and Orinoco rivers.
3. They are usually dark green in color, have 2 rows of black spots on their back and white marks on their sides.
4. They can stay under water for 10 minuets.
5. They like to eat fish, turtles, caimans, capybaras, pigs, jaguars, deer…
6. They mate in April and May Six months later, female anaconda gives birth to 20-40 young anacondas.
Some say they have seen a snake, a great snake…
Have you ever heard the hiss of the waters? If you have read this, if not, I advise you not to. It all starts in a little village along the river Nile, where a woman bathed in a lake; suddenly she felt a brush on her leg. One month passed and she thought not of it, until she gave birth to two snakes and chucked them in the river. If you are reading this, and have felt a brush on your leg, you know what’s about to happen.
God bless.
The Great Snake
My review on the great snake will not just show the good things but the bad things as well. Read on to see what rating this book gets.
In my opinion the Great Snake is good because it has a very good storyline and it is very imaginative, but I think they could have made it not so easy for Norato to find the “right person” to kill the snake skin.
Now for my suggestions to make the story even better. I think they could describe the starting snake more. And they could say more about Maria-Canana.
Facts about Great Snakes
The king cobra is the world’s longest venomous snake it kills other snakes and averages three to four meters.
The Scrub Python is the largest non-venomous snake in all of Australia its maximum length is eight to five meters (28 feet).
The African rock Python has an average adult length of eighteen feet, and maximum 25 feet long. It eats any thing that it can fit in its mouth!!!
The carpet Python reaches between two to four meters. Males are smaller than females and females are four times heavier.
Be careful of these big horrible snakes!!!
The Great Snake and the Tiny Gerbil
Once upon a time in the Amazon rainforest there was a great snake. He was mean and cruel and over-confident. One day there was a tiny gerbil who was very small but very wise and he wanted payback on the great snake for destroying his home. Once the great snake had to stay with his friends the serpents, then the little gerbil got to work. They put leaves over lava and moved his home in front of it. When the great snake got home, he fell into lava and died.
THE END
There was once a great great snake
It lived in a big big lake
As it twisted and turned
It grimaced and cursed
For it was the a snake so great.
It loved to eat small fish
In fact it was her favourite dish
In her snapping jaws
Went the fish so small
And after all she was indeed very tall
For she was the snake so great.
There was once a great great snake
It lived in a big big lake
As it twisted and turned
It grimaced and cursed
For it was the snake so great.
My dad has never worn sandals since three years ago when we went to France and this is why. He woke up in a good mood but needing a stretch. It was early so he tiptoed downstairs. He noticed a forest and went into it. There was a path leading through the trees. Soon he got to ground which was covered in loose stones and just then a snake started moving towards him he turned and saw another! Jumping and swearing he ran!