It was on saturday night. In every single newspaper ever wrote.
My parents where out at dinner and was at my friends house for the night. nothing possibly could go wrong. Thats when i got the news. I thought it was good news. I asked and my friends (Edward) parents and they shook there head sadly.
“i am so sorry Jack, said his mum, “your parents have been killed in a car accident.”
After that she started sobbing. I felt angry. I ran out of the house onto the street and ran as fast as i could to absolutely nowhere.
Jack Yanfonza was a 32 year old man who was dressed in a smart suit and spoke with a faint Russian accent. He arrived in a yellow Camaro followed by two black 4X4s. He walked up a flight of stairs and into a dark room. There was a table in the corner with four briefcases on it. There were 8 men standing by it. Suddenly, Jack and his men pulled out sawed off double barreled shotguns and shot the men. They took the briefcases and drove off. Meanwhile Yan Markoza pressed a button. Suddenly, the car went up in flames.
Jake was with the police who were asking him if he could help catch a very dangerous criminal. “They’re robbing people’s kitchens on Shady Road.” “That’s my road!” exclaimed Jake. So he accepted the police’s offer and waited till night by preparing. He was given a walkie-talkie and handcuffs. It was eleven a clock and then he saw his neighbour’s door being opened. Jake ran down stairs and said “Ah hah! I’ve caught you!” Then he realised it was just a badger looking for food. “I’ve caught your criminal, it’s only a very hungry badger!” he said into the walkie-talkie.
I have never passed on this story to anyone not even to my parents, but I know I can trust you. Right, this is how it goes, it all started with the crime I made and quite bad one that put me in jail. They didn’t put in the newspaper because it was that horrific and dangerous. I didn’t mean to kill him he was just so….wait how can I deny it. I just can’t say what I did. I killed someone but I can’t tell you why it’s just bad. I’m sorry, plus I escaped so watch your step!
1. Male prisoners outnumber female by more than 21 to one.
2. According to a report in 2009 the cost of organised crime in the UK is £40billion a year.
3. There were an estimated 8.6 million crimes in England and Wales in the year ending March 2013.
4. In ancient China the punishment for small criminal infractions such as shoplifting or breaking a curfew was to brand the offender’s forehead with a hot iron.
5. In ancient Egypt, killing a cat was punishable by death.
6. You’re 66 times more likely to be prosecuted in the USA then France.
He came here in the first place because of the secret oil factory. He almost instantly heard shouting. It was as if there was trouble. That was when he heard it. Coming from behind the door. He went to investigate.
The old, rusty door creaked opened. There was a machine working inside it. A bomb. He had to disarm it.
He opened the lid. The red, green and blue wires were very complicated. He worked quickly and got the bomb disarmed.
100-word challenge prompts The Crime
By Tom. D. Williams
One day in Manchester a man went there to watch Manchester united VS Liverpool in the finals. Yet when he walked in to the village he did not know that on every man had to where a hat on a Sunday but the game was on Monday so he happily watched Manchester united beat Liverpool 4.1 but his friend who was picking him up was stuck in traffic so he was going to come the next day. So the next day he walk outside and police men ran up to him and said you broke the law.
It was the dead of night on Christmas and I was planning to capture Santa (my mum.) Just then I heard shuffling, footsteps heading towards my room…
I flicked on the light and found out it was not my mum but a robber!
After I had woken up from the punch the robber gave me, I saw my room had been turned upside down, my presents had been stolen and when I looked in the mirror, I saw that I had a bruise. I rushed downstairs to tell mum, she was lying on the floor….
At 03.00am on the 8th of August 1963 a gang of 15 men, led by Bruce Reynolds, committed one of the most infamous crimes of the 20th century in which they attacked a mail train carrying around £2.6 million £46 million in today’s money; it was the great train robbery! The train driver ,Jack Mill, was badly injured and in 15-20 minutes the robbers had removed and transferred 120 sacks of money.11 members were sentenced to terms of up to 30 years. Reynolds recently died at 81 on the 28th of February 2013 after a brief illness.
Poaching is killing animals that are in a protected area or the whole species is protected by the law so it is a crime. The poachers do this for money by selling the body parts for medicine which doesn’t work, skins for rugs, meat for food, and teeth, claws and heads for decorations. For example Sumatran tigers are an internationally protected species and there are about 500 left in the wild and they’re being poached and their skins, bones, and other body parts are sold for money, if this carries on Sumatran tigers will be extinct in a few decades!
I was with my friends and we were walking down the street then we saw this massive house, it was the house in the newspaper, someone stole a really priceless item! So all over the building there was police, we were a bit scared because he or she might steal from our house.
They might steal:
My cat
My dog
My ruby
My ring
Or anything that is expensive!!! Although I don’t have much that is. The next the day the newspaper said that the criminal had been found. We were all happy that no one else got stolen from!!!
It was on saturday night. In every single newspaper ever wrote.
My parents where out at dinner and was at my friends house for the night. nothing possibly could go wrong. Thats when i got the news. I thought it was good news. I asked and my friends (Edward) parents and they shook there head sadly.
“i am so sorry Jack, said his mum, “your parents have been killed in a car accident.”
After that she started sobbing. I felt angry. I ran out of the house onto the street and ran as fast as i could to absolutely nowhere.
my comment on THE CRIME was not published! why?
I don’t know Gabriel… I’m sorry I approve all the ones I see, after editing them.
Jack Yanfonza was a 32 year old man who was dressed in a smart suit and spoke with a faint Russian accent. He arrived in a yellow Camaro followed by two black 4X4s. He walked up a flight of stairs and into a dark room. There was a table in the corner with four briefcases on it. There were 8 men standing by it. Suddenly, Jack and his men pulled out sawed off double barreled shotguns and shot the men. They took the briefcases and drove off. Meanwhile Yan Markoza pressed a button. Suddenly, the car went up in flames.
Jake was with the police who were asking him if he could help catch a very dangerous criminal. “They’re robbing people’s kitchens on Shady Road.” “That’s my road!” exclaimed Jake. So he accepted the police’s offer and waited till night by preparing. He was given a walkie-talkie and handcuffs. It was eleven a clock and then he saw his neighbour’s door being opened. Jake ran down stairs and said “Ah hah! I’ve caught you!” Then he realised it was just a badger looking for food. “I’ve caught your criminal, it’s only a very hungry badger!” he said into the walkie-talkie.
I have never passed on this story to anyone not even to my parents, but I know I can trust you. Right, this is how it goes, it all started with the crime I made and quite bad one that put me in jail. They didn’t put in the newspaper because it was that horrific and dangerous. I didn’t mean to kill him he was just so….wait how can I deny it. I just can’t say what I did. I killed someone but I can’t tell you why it’s just bad. I’m sorry, plus I escaped so watch your step!
Sawdah this is amazing!!!
1. Male prisoners outnumber female by more than 21 to one.
2. According to a report in 2009 the cost of organised crime in the UK is £40billion a year.
3. There were an estimated 8.6 million crimes in England and Wales in the year ending March 2013.
4. In ancient China the punishment for small criminal infractions such as shoplifting or breaking a curfew was to brand the offender’s forehead with a hot iron.
5. In ancient Egypt, killing a cat was punishable by death.
6. You’re 66 times more likely to be prosecuted in the USA then France.
The Crime:
It was so well planned,
To the last detail.
It couldn’t have gone wrong.
But it did.
It was the 9th of November,
The mist thick and icy snow,
Fingers of frost,
Spread across the windows,
Grabbing at the unreachable.
The rotting shed looked abandoned,
But that couldn’t have been more wrong.
The walls, soundproof,
Hid the greatest secrets of mankind.
John knew the place,
And heard their plot,
The murder took place two days after,
Blaxhall church.
Raonda Harris held his gun,
Hand shaking,
Pulled the trigger,
Bang.
The bullet had ricocheted off Bob Gordon,
Head of MI6,
Bullet-proof armour and all.
Straight through the best assassin in the world.
Could the next one be:
Elaborate
Thanks,
L
Crime
Crime is the man who steals your phone
Crime is the man who kills your kin
Crime is the man who robs the bank
Crime is the man who destroys people’s lives
Crime is the man that sells you the drugs
Crime is the man who downloads the movie
Crime is the man who you wouldn’t expect
Crime is the man that abuses the young
Crime is the man who fakes his identity
Crime is the man who pulls the guns trigger
Crime is that person that got lured from good
Crime is a person. Are you it’s friend?
Death is closer than it seems
James Bond spun round. He had heard something.
He came here in the first place because of the secret oil factory. He almost instantly heard shouting. It was as if there was trouble. That was when he heard it. Coming from behind the door. He went to investigate.
The old, rusty door creaked opened. There was a machine working inside it. A bomb. He had to disarm it.
He opened the lid. The red, green and blue wires were very complicated. He worked quickly and got the bomb disarmed.
The crime was no more.
100-word challenge prompts The Crime
By Tom. D. Williams
One day in Manchester a man went there to watch Manchester united VS Liverpool in the finals. Yet when he walked in to the village he did not know that on every man had to where a hat on a Sunday but the game was on Monday so he happily watched Manchester united beat Liverpool 4.1 but his friend who was picking him up was stuck in traffic so he was going to come the next day. So the next day he walk outside and police men ran up to him and said you broke the law.
It was the dead of night on Christmas and I was planning to capture Santa (my mum.) Just then I heard shuffling, footsteps heading towards my room…
I flicked on the light and found out it was not my mum but a robber!
After I had woken up from the punch the robber gave me, I saw my room had been turned upside down, my presents had been stolen and when I looked in the mirror, I saw that I had a bruise. I rushed downstairs to tell mum, she was lying on the floor….
At 03.00am on the 8th of August 1963 a gang of 15 men, led by Bruce Reynolds, committed one of the most infamous crimes of the 20th century in which they attacked a mail train carrying around £2.6 million £46 million in today’s money; it was the great train robbery! The train driver ,Jack Mill, was badly injured and in 15-20 minutes the robbers had removed and transferred 120 sacks of money.11 members were sentenced to terms of up to 30 years. Reynolds recently died at 81 on the 28th of February 2013 after a brief illness.
Poaching is killing animals that are in a protected area or the whole species is protected by the law so it is a crime. The poachers do this for money by selling the body parts for medicine which doesn’t work, skins for rugs, meat for food, and teeth, claws and heads for decorations. For example Sumatran tigers are an internationally protected species and there are about 500 left in the wild and they’re being poached and their skins, bones, and other body parts are sold for money, if this carries on Sumatran tigers will be extinct in a few decades!
I was with my friends and we were walking down the street then we saw this massive house, it was the house in the newspaper, someone stole a really priceless item! So all over the building there was police, we were a bit scared because he or she might steal from our house.
They might steal:
My cat
My dog
My ruby
My ring
Or anything that is expensive!!! Although I don’t have much that is. The next the day the newspaper said that the criminal had been found. We were all happy that no one else got stolen from!!!